Marshmallow Mountain Adventure

Posted by aliciaf2016 on Sunday Jan 10, 2016 Under 100 word challenge, 100wc, Wootton

As they scrambled up marshmallow mountain , a massive brown log fell down from the sky.Petrified , one of the little men ran away and hid behind a sticky candycane tree that was near by.Curious to find out where it came from , another man leaped over a gooey gumdrop.Marching towards the object , he gathered all his equipment and set off.He cut a tiny chunk off and put it in a jar.Higher and higher he climbed up the vast thing.He stopped.He listened.There was a loud rumble and a load of colourful hundards and thousands.

One Response to “Marshmallow Mountain Adventure”

  1. rebeccam2016 Says:

    I like the use of punctuation and short snappy sentences.Also the cliff hanger you left it on was very good.

      

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