The transporting clock??

Posted by charlottel2016 on Thursday Jan 14, 2016 Under 100 word challenge, 100wc, Wootton

As I joined the queue, I looked around at all the amazing antiques.but I stared at the on that stood out from the rest I muttered to my self “This is a magic clock I know it!.”

Once I had paid for it and had got home, I opened my door and What had happened ? It looked like the 1900 this was NOT my house! As I walked in the house my clothes and my hair were different AND I HAD GLASSES…As I walked in I figured out how I got here…

3 Responses to “The transporting clock??”

  1. jessicak2016 Says:

    WOW I loved your story it was extremely good because I loved all of the suspense

    I think it would be better if you could build up to why you we’re different.

      

  2. isabelr2016 Says:

    We’ll done this is brilliant I love the fact how the magic clock transports you back in time.

    EBI:you used some more of the fantastics

      

  3. rhiannar2016 Says:

    This a wonderful story because you have used suspense and mystery.

    EBI:you built up to why you were different.

      

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