Tom and Mo

Posted by alfiec2016 on Saturday Jan 9, 2016 Under 100 word challenge, 100wc, Wootton

One amazing day, there were two great workers called Tom and Mo.

Mo was very tired but Tom wasn’t he was eager to build the greatest cake of all time.

”It’s really hard!” exclaimed Mo.

”No it’s not.” replied Tom.

It was nearly time to announce the winner of the greatest cake challenge there were another fifty teams there with Mo and Tom. It was finally time everyone was ready for the announcement of the winner.

”Drum roll please!” said the announcer. ”The winner is Tom and Mo!”

Everyone cheered Mo and Tom were shocked.

”Yes!” Said Mo

The End

 

 

2 Responses to “Tom and Mo”

  1. jessicak2016 Says:

    Wow that is brilliant. Even better if you could of used longer sentences and you could of added a comer in It is finally time, everyone was ready for the announcement of the winner. Other than that that was great.

      

  2. willt2016 Says:

    Brilliant story although you could add some more punctuation – It was nearly time to announce the winner of the greatest cake challenge! There were another fifty teams there with Mo and Tom, it was finally time, everyone was ready for the announcement of the winner…

      

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